I had one of those unusual days where I didn't expect to get much done, but ended up getting a ton of words. Funny how expectations work sometimes.
The same thing happens to me at the gym. There are mornings where I feel awful, run-down, and weak, but I go in anyway because I can only get there at certain times and on certain days. And you know what happens sometimes? Those why-the-hell-am-I-even-here days end up being my best ones. I PR'ed on my deadlift a couple months back on such a day, where I was stiff as hell and exhausted just from walking into the gym.
The opposite also happens too. There are days I get into the weight room, just raring to go, feeling like a forklift, but then ... I can barely bench what was easy last year.
Bottom line? Expectations aren't very accurate. Your worst days can actually be your best days, and vice versa. So maybe the lesson here is just to ignore how you're feeling and just see how you perform. This is not to say you should try to squat when your knee is aching in a strange way and it feels like your ACL is about to pop. Or to try getting 10,000 words in when you've got a 103 degree fever. This is only to say, don't let your expectations dictate what actually happens, because they're often way, way off.
Anyway, here's today's update:
September 20th
Pre-Production: 30 min
Drafting: 5.5 hours
Daily Word Count: 7,337
Total Word Count: 15,017
What slowed me down? Nothing seemed to slow me down today. Though my productivity after the kids went to bed was miniscule compared to earlier in the day. That comes as no shock. But like I said above, I went into today with low expectations and ended up killing it. I'm tempted to lower my expectations tomorrow and see what happens, but I also want to be careful there. I do have a word count I want to hit and I fear if I create a habit of lowering expectations, then subconsciously I'll start telling myself it's alright if I slack off. We shall see.
Thursday, September 21, 2017
Wednesday, September 20, 2017
Heroic Fantasy Novel Update
As mentioned in yesterday's blog, I'm challenging myself to write AND edit a 90k - 100k historical fantasy novel in 21 days. Yes, this is unreasonable. But to paraphrase George Bernard Shaw, only unreasonable people can change the world.
September 18th
September 18th
- Outline for 3 hours
- Pre-Production for 2 hours
- What slowed me down today? Editing two other books. No cure for that, shit's gotta get done. Hopefully this little experiment proves to me you can write and then edit what you wrote right away, so in the future there is no gap between the two processes.
September 19th
- Pre-Production for 3 hours
- Drafting for 5 hours
- Daily Word Count: 7,680 words
- Total Word Count: 7,680 words
- What slowed me down today? World-building. What does the Abbey look like? What does the refectory inside the Abbey look like? What would they eat for dinner? What does the Mark of the Bull look like? Should it be a coin or should it be something else? Descriptions bog me down. What should the training room look like? How else could I describe the stone floor, other than "cold" and "hard"? The answers to these questions aren't life-and-death but they still need to be provided to the reader. Our characters can't go from "a room" to "another room." They also wear clothes. CLOTHES! Do the warrior-monks residing in the Abbey of Bronze wear habits? Or would they wear armor all the time?
- How can I solve this problem? More pre-production next time. I will look ahead in my outline and try to better anticipate these issues. But I feel like these things will always come up. The goal is just to reduce the amount of them.
Tuesday, September 19, 2017
Can a book be written AND edited in 21 days?
I've written some books of my books in less than 21 days, then followed the conventional wisdom about setting them aside for a few months to gain some objectivity and distance from the material before editing.
And here's what happens when I do that--
That novel that took me only a couple weeks to write has now sat on its ass for months and the editing ends up taking foreverrrrrrrr .............. the book I just released, The Dead Girl, was written in March and now here we are, in the middle of September. Did sitting on the story for that long make it significantly better?
As the writer, I'm probably not in the best position to determine that but a big part of me has a sneaking suspicion that the answer is no. Or at least, the book isn't significantly better. Instead I could have finished writing The Dead Girl, then gone right back to page 1 to start editing. All those glaring typos, unconscious echoing (I've used the word "just" 15x on this page alone), word choice, continuity errors, etc, would probably have jumped off the page just as obviously.
What I have found is that waiting that long to edit a story TAKES ME OUT OF THE STORY. Yes, I have some distance but too much distance isn't a great thing. When I wait a couple months to edit, I'll get to, say, page 30 and then larger question pops up. It goes something like this with my internal monologue in italics:
There's a plot thread I wanted to work out here, but I don't remember if THIS and THAT happened later. Or did I decide NOT to do this and instead DID THAT OTHER THING?
Or did SOANDSO meet up and SAY THIS?
But wait, I did THIS THING OVER SOMEWHERE I think, and so do I really need THIS and THAT here?
When questions like this pop up and I don't know the answer right away, I'm no longer in editing mode. Now I'm in search mode and also in danger of entering the dreaded rewrite mode. I get bogged down and the editing grinds to a halt. If there are significant rewrites, then I feel like I need to set the rewrites aside for a period of time to gain distance and ... you get the idea.
I suspect these same larger questions would still arise if I edited right away. But I also think they'd be easier to answer:
Wait, didn't I want to ... oh no, that's right I did X, Y, and Z later in the book. Good to go.
Oh yeah, I wanted to change this. That means I have to tweak THIS, THAT, and THE OTHER THING OVER HERE. Okay, I can do that quickly.
I can't help but feel the process would become lightning quick if I started editing right away BECAUSE I'M STILL IN THE STORY. I'm much more likely to remember all the ins and outs, creative choices I made, and also much more likely to remember where these things are.
This is just a theory of course, a theory that flies in the face of conventional wisdom. But so-called conventional wisdom has been wrong before, and it will be wrong again, and I'm going to test my hypothesis on the heroic fantasy novel I'm working on right now.
I think I'll be doing a series of videos on this to chart my progress. Other authors have done 21 day challenges before so I can hardly claim to be the first, but I thought it might be helpful to share my process and discuss the things that slow me down with the goal of bringing these problems into the forefront of my consciousness so I can solve them. I'm not doing this because I think my writing process is more interesting than anybody else's. I'm doing this because I want to show other authors it's possible to write AND edit a book quickly, much more quickly than is commonly thought possible.
I outlined the story yesterday over the course of three hours, using the famous Disney memo about the Hero's Journey as a reference, and my goal is to write a 90k fantasy novel in two weeks and then turn right around and edit it in one week. I think this is doable. And the best part?
So what if I fail?
If it takes me 28 days as opposed to 21, I'VE STILL WRITTEN AND EDITED A FULL LENGTH NOVEL IN A MONTH.
If that's failure, I'll take failure every time.
Tomorrow I'll talk about some of the things I did to speed up the writing process before I got started. Maybe a video too. We shall see. I have a word count to hit ;-)
And here's what happens when I do that--
That novel that took me only a couple weeks to write has now sat on its ass for months and the editing ends up taking foreverrrrrrrr .............. the book I just released, The Dead Girl, was written in March and now here we are, in the middle of September. Did sitting on the story for that long make it significantly better?
As the writer, I'm probably not in the best position to determine that but a big part of me has a sneaking suspicion that the answer is no. Or at least, the book isn't significantly better. Instead I could have finished writing The Dead Girl, then gone right back to page 1 to start editing. All those glaring typos, unconscious echoing (I've used the word "just" 15x on this page alone), word choice, continuity errors, etc, would probably have jumped off the page just as obviously.
What I have found is that waiting that long to edit a story TAKES ME OUT OF THE STORY. Yes, I have some distance but too much distance isn't a great thing. When I wait a couple months to edit, I'll get to, say, page 30 and then larger question pops up. It goes something like this with my internal monologue in italics:
There's a plot thread I wanted to work out here, but I don't remember if THIS and THAT happened later. Or did I decide NOT to do this and instead DID THAT OTHER THING?
Or did SOANDSO meet up and SAY THIS?
But wait, I did THIS THING OVER SOMEWHERE I think, and so do I really need THIS and THAT here?
When questions like this pop up and I don't know the answer right away, I'm no longer in editing mode. Now I'm in search mode and also in danger of entering the dreaded rewrite mode. I get bogged down and the editing grinds to a halt. If there are significant rewrites, then I feel like I need to set the rewrites aside for a period of time to gain distance and ... you get the idea.
I suspect these same larger questions would still arise if I edited right away. But I also think they'd be easier to answer:
Wait, didn't I want to ... oh no, that's right I did X, Y, and Z later in the book. Good to go.
Oh yeah, I wanted to change this. That means I have to tweak THIS, THAT, and THE OTHER THING OVER HERE. Okay, I can do that quickly.
I can't help but feel the process would become lightning quick if I started editing right away BECAUSE I'M STILL IN THE STORY. I'm much more likely to remember all the ins and outs, creative choices I made, and also much more likely to remember where these things are.
This is just a theory of course, a theory that flies in the face of conventional wisdom. But so-called conventional wisdom has been wrong before, and it will be wrong again, and I'm going to test my hypothesis on the heroic fantasy novel I'm working on right now.
I think I'll be doing a series of videos on this to chart my progress. Other authors have done 21 day challenges before so I can hardly claim to be the first, but I thought it might be helpful to share my process and discuss the things that slow me down with the goal of bringing these problems into the forefront of my consciousness so I can solve them. I'm not doing this because I think my writing process is more interesting than anybody else's. I'm doing this because I want to show other authors it's possible to write AND edit a book quickly, much more quickly than is commonly thought possible.
I outlined the story yesterday over the course of three hours, using the famous Disney memo about the Hero's Journey as a reference, and my goal is to write a 90k fantasy novel in two weeks and then turn right around and edit it in one week. I think this is doable. And the best part?
So what if I fail?
If it takes me 28 days as opposed to 21, I'VE STILL WRITTEN AND EDITED A FULL LENGTH NOVEL IN A MONTH.
If that's failure, I'll take failure every time.
Tomorrow I'll talk about some of the things I did to speed up the writing process before I got started. Maybe a video too. We shall see. I have a word count to hit ;-)
Wednesday, September 13, 2017
The Insane 2017 Publishing Experiment Has Already Begun
Hey readers - Been a while since my last post, but I have a good excuse: I've spent a good chunk of my time actually writing. And you know what happened when I did that? I actually wrote some books.
Many, in fact.
As anybody who has tried to indie publish knows, it's getting more and more difficult to gain visibility on Amazon. To put that in laymen's terms, I simply mean it's getting harder to be noticed by readers.
Big name authors, i.e. those hard-working and fortunate enough to have gained a significant following already, are somewhat immune to this increasing difficulty as they have large readerships who are willing to purchase or borrow just about anything they put out. Think Stephen King and Lee Child. They can release a book per year and be just fine. Other big-time indie authors can do the same thing and still see significant sales.
As for the rest (most) of us ... well that just doesn't work. If you're lucky enough to score a breakout, record-smashing bestseller, then you can join the ranks of the elite on Mount Olympus and publish fairly infrequently. The chances of this happening to any author are about the same as winning the lottery.
It seems that Amazon's latest version of algorithms (how it directs readers to books, and how the website influences a reader's purchasing decisions) strongly favors new releases. This incentivizes writers, especially those looking to break through to the next level, to put out quality books as quickly as possible.
So that's my game plan for the rest of 2017. Write, edit, release, repeat. As quickly as possible. So that's why:
The latest Eddie McCloskey novel launched August 29th.
And one week later, the final comedic mystery, Not Safe for Work, in my Close of Business series was available too!
And in the next day or two, the first in my new amateur sleuth series will drop. Here's the cover:
The plan is to release several more novels this year and sprinkle short stories in between book launches. The goal is to utilize Amazon's algorithms to my advantage and increase my visibility. Fingers crossed this works, and I'll strive to send out periodic updates about my progress.
Many, in fact.
As anybody who has tried to indie publish knows, it's getting more and more difficult to gain visibility on Amazon. To put that in laymen's terms, I simply mean it's getting harder to be noticed by readers.
Big name authors, i.e. those hard-working and fortunate enough to have gained a significant following already, are somewhat immune to this increasing difficulty as they have large readerships who are willing to purchase or borrow just about anything they put out. Think Stephen King and Lee Child. They can release a book per year and be just fine. Other big-time indie authors can do the same thing and still see significant sales.
As for the rest (most) of us ... well that just doesn't work. If you're lucky enough to score a breakout, record-smashing bestseller, then you can join the ranks of the elite on Mount Olympus and publish fairly infrequently. The chances of this happening to any author are about the same as winning the lottery.
It seems that Amazon's latest version of algorithms (how it directs readers to books, and how the website influences a reader's purchasing decisions) strongly favors new releases. This incentivizes writers, especially those looking to break through to the next level, to put out quality books as quickly as possible.
So that's my game plan for the rest of 2017. Write, edit, release, repeat. As quickly as possible. So that's why:
The latest Eddie McCloskey novel launched August 29th.
And one week later, the final comedic mystery, Not Safe for Work, in my Close of Business series was available too!
And in the next day or two, the first in my new amateur sleuth series will drop. Here's the cover:
The plan is to release several more novels this year and sprinkle short stories in between book launches. The goal is to utilize Amazon's algorithms to my advantage and increase my visibility. Fingers crossed this works, and I'll strive to send out periodic updates about my progress.
Tuesday, February 21, 2017
The Board - first two chapters
Fellow author Jim Gott and I have been working on this crime thriller, which we are getting ready to shop and/or indie publish. I've described it before on this blog so loyal readers will know it already. So I'll summarize with my Hollywood-like pitch.
The Board is a crime thriller that brings Corporate America and the Irish Mob together in one fast-paced, darkly humorous, suspenseful romp. This story is raw and energetic and doesn't let up. We like to describe it as Wall Street meets The Departed.
Here are the first two chapters (still in beta draft) of The Board. Coming soon to a bestseller list near you - and to the theaters in a few years!
(RATED R!)
Two
The Board is a crime thriller that brings Corporate America and the Irish Mob together in one fast-paced, darkly humorous, suspenseful romp. This story is raw and energetic and doesn't let up. We like to describe it as Wall Street meets The Departed.
Here are the first two chapters (still in beta draft) of The Board. Coming soon to a bestseller list near you - and to the theaters in a few years!
(RATED R!)
One
My name is Nate Charles and
I’m very good at what I do.
At least
most of the time. Right now I’m sitting in the public garden, my favorite
lunchtime retreat, struggling to come up with a metric that tells the story I
want to tell so we can close out this project and cut the final invoice.
Here’s the
deal.
The client
has no additional capital, works with unstructured data, and half their staff
is feeding me shit information because they want my company to fail. The other
half wants to hire us.
Welcome to
the world of consulting.
I block out
the noise of the city while the flora all around me knocks out the stink. In my
mind all I can picture is a simple PowerPoint graph, the same slide everybody’s
seen not quite a billion times before they reach the age of thirty. I close my
eyes and try to clear my mind of the noise, of the distractions, of that
infrequent sinking feeling I get about my fiancée, of that one thought I’ve had
ever since I joined McAuliffe Consulting a very short seven years ago:
I want to be a member of the Board.
Nobody as
young as me has ever been appointed to the Board. But I’m on track. If I can
close two or three more major deals I’m in and I’ll have something to show for
all the seventy-hour weeks I’ve been putting in.
I take a
deep breath and remember the words of my boss and mentor, Lawrence.
It’s all in
how you tell the story. We can talk about volume or we can talk about spend, or
we can actually tell the truth, which is, the most value is in getting it right
up front before we consultants come in and charge hundreds of thousands of
dollars.
The
PowerPoint slide in my mind morphs into a new, dynamic graph.
And I
realize: what they need is a ratio.
I’ve got
it.
The ratio
tells the story.
This is
where the action is, the million synapses firing at the speed of light in the
grey matter filling the six inches between my ears. That grey matter helps me work in the grey area between truth and fact. What Lawrence calls the narrative. We all do this, every
day, all day. We all make up the story of our lives in a way that makes us
happy, or at least comfortable.
I like to
talk to myself too. “All we have to do is show them—”
“There the
fuck you are!”
The
beautiful graph I’ve got pictured perfectly in my mind dissolves and the garden
comes back into focus. Enter my boss, Lawrence Heller, well-dressed as always.
Lawrence is a member of the Board and just beginning to show his age in his
late thirties. All at once the city’s chorus of car horns, people, electricity,
and sound hit me full force.
I get up. “Afternoon,
Lawrence.”
“I’ve been
trying to get a hold of you.” Lawrence waves quickly, signaling me to hurry.
“Are you ready for the Board?”
I’m about
to say, yes, I’m ready to join the Board. But before I say that, I realize
Lawrence means something else entirely.
“Come on,
kid. Don’t tell me you’re not ready for the meeting,” Lawrence says.
“I was born
ready.” I smile. “What meeting?”
“I sent you
the invite.”
I check my
phone. No invite. “I don’t see it.”
Lawrence
feigns surprise. I know he’s feigning because he always does this. He’s great
at many things but God-awful when it comes to keeping his people in the loop.
“Don’t tell me you didn’t—I know I sent it—IT was supposed to fix—everybody’s been
complaining about Outlook not working. They really need to get on top of it.”
I keep
smiling, but inside I’m thinking that my Friday night has just gotten shot to
shit. I’ve been working my ass off the last month, barely seeing my fiancée.
She’s great, but lately there’s been a noticeable distance between us. Jessica
and I have reservations at a swanky joint downtown where I hope we can talk and
spend some quality time together. But I know this is a long shot. Jessica has
some interesting sexual habits, including quasi-public expositions.
You might
think that’s pretty cool. And it is. The first hundred times. But anymore it
seems like Jessica only cares about having more sex and more money.
With all
this going on, I want to call bullshit on Lawrence sending me the invite but I
can’t. He’s championing me for the Board, a position that would triple my
salary and set me up for life. He has a bad habit of dumping work on me last
minute. Smaller minds would complain but I prefer to see these situations as
opportunities. The more he needs me, the more I’m worth.
I leave the
garden and meet Lawrence on the sidewalk. It’s one o’clock and everybody is
hustling. Taxis redefine traffic lanes, and the air feels dirty and stale.
Lawrence
says, “You remember the St. John’s Healthcare presentation you put together?”
“We showed
them how to account for claims with micro-adjustments. It was a good one.”
“I fucking
loved it. But I had to completely change it.”
“Okay … so
what are we presenting to the Board?”
“Are you
listening? St. John’s Healthcare! I tweaked the slides and figured since you
were closer to the material, you’re in the best position to speak to it. And
it’s a great opportunity for you to get face-time with the Powers-That-Be.”
I motion
for Lawrence to follow. “I’m across the street.”
Lawrence
doesn’t follow. “Wait, are you still driving the convertible?”
Here we go.
“You’re not going to bust my balls with your theory about convertibles again,
are you?”
Lawrence
points at me. “Two guys should never be seen together in a convertible. It’s eh
… you know.”
“You mean
gay, right?”
Lawrence
pretends to be offended. “Did I say gay? I did not say gay.”
I smile
because we both know that’s what he meant.
Lawrence
raises a hand. “Taxi!”
Two
Lawrence has his phone to
his ear. “Tell Melanie and the Board we’ll be ready.”
So we’re in
the back of a taxi because Lawrence thinks two guys riding in a convertible is
a threat to his heterosexuality. But that’s not as annoying as the fact that
I’ll have to swing by here after work to get my car.
But you
know what? Lawrence Heller gave me my shot in consulting. Where I am at my best
and where I am meant to be. I remind myself of that every time he does
something that’s kind of dick. The guy could have picked a blue-blooded bastard
with familial or country club ties to the Board members, but he saw me and
decided to go with the diamond in the rough.
“Yes, have
the St. John’s deck ready.” Lawrence shoots me a look. “We’ll be putting on a show.”
Most of our
consultants went to Harvard, Northwestern, Stanford, you get the idea. Despite
my 1400 on the SATs, the Ivys wouldn’t touch me. Two things going against me: I
wasn’t from the right side of the tracks and I wasn’t a minority. Screwed
because I wasn’t the right kind of underprivileged.
Senior year
I decided to crash an entrepreneurial fair at another university. Lawrence was
there to recruit some four-point-oh, silver-spoon, stuck-up douchebag but
Lawrence was running late—classic Lawrence—and he missed the captain of the prep
squad’s presentation. Lawrence happened upon mine instead, a slide deck I put
together ten minutes before I left my dorm on innovations at start-ups.
He was
impressed.
I later
found out Lawrence had followed some co-ed into my presentation. If I could find
that girl today, I’d thank her a million times over. Courtesy of her bubble ass,
Lawrence stumbled into the right room at the right time and here I am, seven
years later.
Lawrence
demanded I take him to the local watering hole that night where he complimented
me on my gift for making shit up and sounding convincing, two important skills
that are all too often mutually exclusive, and he went on to wow me with
stories of consulting, bragging about all the money and women he’d scored as a
result.
A week
after I graduated (and sobered up), I was working for Lawrence. In seven years,
I’ve accumulated seventeen years’ worth of experience. My first project was
with an Internet start-up. Like most start-ups, the idea behind the company
sucked balls but we managed to bilk these geeks out of half a mill of their VC
seed money.
I picked up
database encryption on that gig and Lawrence turned right around and sold me as
a database encryption expert to his next client, another Internet start-up.
This company was going nowhere until I figured out how to tie data tables
together from totally different data warehouse systems.
From there
Lawrence sold me to an old school, brick and mortar, manure manufacturer that
was merging with a waste-water treatment company. I ran two teams of IT
programmers, 6 interns, and a bunch of lovely (and cheap) Indians that worked
on programming while the rest of us slept.
I quickly
learned that “yes” in Hydrabad English actually translated to: “I don’t have a
fucking clue.”
Soon enough
I was waking up at three in the morning to tear Patel, Patel, Patel, and Jeff
(don’t ask) a new one over Skype, then catching the mandatory quickie with
Jessica, then sleeping, then hitting the gym at five AM, then shit-shower-shave
and lickedy-split back to the client site by seven in the morning. I’m no IT
expert but I got their data merge done three weeks ahead of schedule and
McAuliffe reaped a nice little bonus.
In twenty-four
months I went from analyst, to consultant, to manager. I kept up the insane
pace and worked my ass off and here I am. Now a senior director.
A fucking
senior director.
“The St.
John deck!” Lawrence is yelling into his phone. “You know the one!”
I shoot
Jessica a quick text to give her a heads-up that I’ll be running late. Her
response comes through a minute later:
Tonight I want you to dress like the
FedEx guy.
The FedEx guy? Not a
FedEx guy? I’m instantly on alert at her choice of words. Is it normal to
wonder if your fiancée orders from QVC so she can bang the FedEx guy? Last
fucking thing I need right now is to worry about Jessica’s fidelity.
“Hey.”
Lawrence nudges me. “You got your thumb up your ass in your head in Idaho. Did
you hear a word of what I said?”
“I got it
all Lawrence.” I wink. “The Board wants to shop my St. John’s success story to
every hospital chain.”
“Whoa
there. St. John’s is my client and our job is not finished there yet. Not by a
fucking long shot.”
“Not finished?”
The cab stops
in front of our building. McAuliffe occupies the twentieth and twenty-first
floors of the skyrise. Lawrence hands the cabbie a fifty and tells him to keep
it. To Lawrence, money is as disposable as toilet paper.
“You got
shit in your ears?” Lawrence is walking so fast, other people have to dive out
of his way. He pulls open the door. “It’s not over.”
“But we
fixed that place.” I’m really confused. There’s nothing left to do. I
even got my genius but major fuck-up brother, John, a nice little gig there
where he earns but doesn’t have too much responsibility and isn’t required to
manage anybody.
“Whole new
ballgame, Nate. James and Vaughn want to push the software for seat fees and
licensing to St. John’s.”
“By
software, you mean that piece of shit, untested Parallax?”
From no
less than twenty yards from the bank of elevators, Lawrence in typical fashion
shouts, “Hold up!” We can’t even see if an elevator is open, but this is one of
Lawrence’s many endearing habits and describes him to a T. The world waits for
Lawrence.
We find a
pretty blonde-from-the-box holding the doors for us with pixie glasses and a
sharp suit. I’m expecting the stink-eye for Lawrence’s yelling to hold the
doors from such a great distance, but he flips her his sly grin and she kind of
bats her eyelashes and I know with certainty three things in this life: death,
taxes, and the fact that Lawrence will make a pass at this woman fifteen years
his junior.
“Thanks so
much,” he says, laying on the charm, invading her personal space so he can push
the button for the twenty-first floor. With his eyes still on her, he says,
“Nate, we need to hire more bright, pretty ladies, don’t we?”
“Wouldn’t
hurt.”
Even though
I’m a pretty good-looking guy and keep in great shape, she completely ignores
me. Lawrence is busy holding that lascivious grin and basically eye-fucking her
as the elevator climbs to twenty-one. We’ve got a meeting with the Board in a
few minutes but he acts like he doesn’t have a care in the world.
Me, on the
other hand, I’m shitting kittens. Parallax, our latest software offering is a
complete and utter piece of shit. I can sell fleas to dogs, but even I can’t
sell this program.
We reach
twenty-one and Lawrence says his goodbyes to the blonde, slipping her his
business card and promising an interview if only she’ll call.
You’d think
the fact that the software is shit would be my biggest problem in trying to
sell it.
But it’s
not.
Nope.
The bigger
problem is, nobody can come out and say it’s shit.
If it were
possible to have an honest conversation about the merits (very few) and the
issues (very many) with Parallax, we could try to come up with a real solution
or, more likely, kill it and move on to something else.
But nothing in the
corporate world is that simple.
Wednesday, February 1, 2017
Interview with JD Franx - Author of Fantasy Bestseller, The Legacy
JD Franx, indie author of #1 best-selling fantasy novel TheLegacy, was kind enough to take time out of his busy publishing schedule to answer a few questions about his writing, editing, and marketing process. Below is a Q&A with yours truly.
I urge you to check out The Legacy. It launched back in October and at the time of this writing, it sits at #2,000 on Amazon. Anybody who has indie-published before through 'Zon knows this is quite an achievement!
EVAN RONAN: Can
you describe your writing process? I’m asking this question very literally. Where do you go?
JD FRANX: I normally write at our kitchen table, and sometimes in the summer I write
outside while at our bistro set.
EVAN: What’s
around you?
JD: Lol. Everything I need. Maps, notebooks of hand written information on Talohna
and several flash drives of more information. Talohna's a big world with
thousands of years of history. Oh, and naturally either a cup of coffee or a
glass of diet Pepsi.
EVAN: Certain
time of day?
JD: That depends on how I feel. I like writing in the morning, usually between
9-12, but when it's possible I do write in the afternoon. I rarely write at
night, unless it's really late and I can't sleep-after midnight.
EVAN: What
do you think about?
JD: When I'm writing I rarely think about anything, I very rarely listen to music
and I try to just let the story flow.
EVAN: When
you write, do you see the scene playing out in your head?
JD: I wouldn't say so, not really anyway.
EVAN: Hear
the people speaking?
JD: Not when writing, no. When I'm not writing, yes.
EVAN: Or
is the writing process more a gut feeling, where you know it’s working or not
working by how your body is reacting to what you’re doing?
JD: As strange as it sounds, I don't worry about whether it's working until later
drafts of the manuscript.
EVAN: How
do you come up with ideas?
JD: I hate this question, lol. I've been asked it a hundred times or more and it's
one I can't answer. The story is just there.
(I hate that question too, JD!)
EVAN: Do
you outline or fly by the seat of your pants?
JD: This question I love, lol. I am purely a panster writer for every first draft I
write, though I do tweak and adjust the story in subsequent drafts. I rarely
plot ahead, though there are scenes that jump into my head that have to be
written down immediately or they're all I think about. I've never had writer's
block, so I look at it like this: I often wonder if us writers (or maybe just panster
writers) have a 'connection' to the worlds we write. I never have a problem
writing, except for motivation some days, lol. I sit down to write and the
story is always just there, as if I'm tapped into another reality and this
reality is showing me what is happening there in Talohna. I've heard other
pansters say the same, so who knows?
EVAN: How
do you create characters?
JD: Like the stories, they're just there. Though there are times when certain
characters are 'louder' than others so I have to sometimes write their scenes
first.
EVAN: Do
you have to see, or hear, or feel, or all three before you start writing them?
JD: I do at times see hear or feel what I write, but I don't need to in order to
write.
EVAN: Or
do they come out organically as you’re writing?
JD: Most of my characters develop organically, though this one aspect I'm trying to
improve upon. I have a lot of respect for authors whose characters come alive
on the page and I believe I have a long ways to go before I'm happy with my
own, if that's ever even possible, lol.
EVAN: Do
you consciously think of theme while you’re planning the book, or while you’re
writing the book, or does theme happen on its own?
JD: I do not. I have no ulterior themes hidden within, so any kind of religious or
political, or any statement for that matter that does pop up is purely
unintentional. My only plan or desire is to write a high fantasy world and
characters that readers will enjoy.
EVAN: Do
you model other authors? As you’re writing, do you say: “I want this book to be
like XXX and YYY”?
JD: No. I do have my own favourite authors, like R.A. Salvatore or Tolkien, but I
hope to keep my world and writing as unique as possible. Because I don't plot or plan ahead, there's no desire to emulate others,
at least not consciously, lol.
EVAN: As
you mention on your Author Page and from what reader reviews have indicated,
The Legacy turns some tropes on their proverbial heads. I really admire when
authors do this, because it shows they’re not afraid to experiment and give
readers something new. Being that daring takes guts.
So …
how did you strike a balance between satisfying reader expectations of the
genre, while also subverting the genre as well?
JD: Personally I love all the old fantasy tropes. My two favourite will always be the
portal fantasy and hero's journey tropes. But they have been done to death so I
did consciously try to do something different during the revision stages. Most
portal fantasy stories have the hero being hidden away in another realm/reality/world
in order to hide him/her from the big bad. Instead I flipped the trope and used
it to hide the big bad in a different world when he was born—in order to save
Talohna from a prophesied apocalypse. As for the hero's journey quest, I often
find in other books that the hero is perfect at everything(of which I also
love) whether magic, sword-fighting, or whatever they happen to need at the
time. In Talohna, it doesn't work that way and Kael spends most of his time
screwing up these things and getting into trouble because of it, lol.
EVAN: What
tropes were you willing to play with, and what tropes did you hold sacred?
JD: I'm willing to play with any trope that serves the plot or that creates
something different, something readers haven't seen. That's what makes for a
great story in my opinion—show readers something fresh. For Talohna I wanted to
reassert what vampires and werewolves are to me. I grew up on Bram Stoker's
Dracula and Lost Boys vampires—predatory killers. And on The Howling and Silver
Bullet werewolves—massive beasts that stalked their prey on two legs and were
often conscious of what they were doing. Today's beasts have been seriously
neutered based on my childhood experiences, though I have to admit that hasn't
prevented some incredible stories from being written. These creatures will just
always hold a different meaning to me.
EVAN: What
I’m most impressed with is how successfully The Legacy launched. This is your first
book, so presumably you had no readership, no mailing list, in other words,
people weren’t lining up to grab their copy. And yet, The Legacy blasted up
the charts when it came out. What did you do to create such a successful
launch?
JD: Good question. I have worked extremely hard the last three years to build a small
but loyal reader audience. I don't do the Facebook or Twitter 'like for like
ladders' and instead I've tried to follow and earn follows from readers
honestly interested in my series. It helped.
EVAN: How
did you get the word out about this book ahead of time?
JD: Besides what I mentioned above, not much else. I didn't have the resources
ahead of time, instead I focused on the release.
EVAN: How
did you build reader anticipation prior to launch?
JD: Again, with the exception of my Facebook author page and Twitter, very little.
EVAN: What
other steps did you take so to give yourself the best possible chance of a
really successful release?
JD: I did spend a bit of money for ads during release week, which helped get me to
#1 in Amazon's smaller categories and from there it just continued to climb until
it hit #1 on the bigger lists. Kindle Unlimited also helped a lot, especially
with reviews and visibility. Readers are a lot more willing to take a chance on
a new author when they can read it for free through their Prime subscription. I
think KU is a great tool for new authors, if you're willing to monitor it and
report any abnormalities.
EVAN: As a corollary to that, the next thing I’m
really impressed with is how “sticky” The Legacy is. It currently
sits at #2,000 on Amazon and it’s been out for over three months! So …
following your launch, what have you done in terms of marketing, if anything?
JD: The
Legacy is selling and being read through KU very steadily so my rank and #1
positions now pretty much rely on how other authors are doing, lol. I've been
bouncing around from between the 300s-1200s overall since the middle of
December. Facebook ads have been my greatest investment. I tried other services
and they help a bit, where as my Facebooks often pay for themselves in a matter
of days.
EVAN: What
actions have you taken to keep the book sticky?
JD: My ads and word of mouth now, along with the willingness to talk and engage
with fans and readers at every opportunity, I think.
EVAN: Aside
from writing a great book, what other factors do you think contributed to your
success?
JD: Besides those I've mentioned earlier, I have no idea. Maybe luck or the cover,
maybe it is the story itself—The Legacy has 115 reviews in only 3 months, most
are 4 and 5 stars. Or perhaps it's the willingness and ability to spend money
on ads. A combination of all the above maybe? Who knows? I guess we'll see how
well the following books do, lol. Maybe then I'll have a better idea of what
works for sure.
EVAN: And
last, but not least, who created that cover? It’s kick-ass!
JD: All my covers are done by a friend, artist Joel Lagerwall. He's an amazing
artist and a great guy. I sincerely hope I can have him do all my covers for
this series.
***
Thanks again to JD for taking the time to answer some questions and provide insight into his process. It's working for him, as his sales/borrows on Amazon show. Keep up the great work, JD!
Saturday, January 14, 2017
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